Thursday, July 29, 2010
I want to spent time with My Model
I never met a model like her in my lifetime. She is a beautiful woman. She has big brown eyes and brown straight hair. She has thin lips and she always has a warm and great smile on her face. She has high cheekbones with dimples on her cheeks. She is not only beautiful on the outside but also on the inside. She is smart and intelligent. She is soft spoken. I lived with this model in one room. We ate together, we drank together and we had fun together. She left me when I was in the 6th grade, but I will remember her all my life. She was special . I want to spend my time with this woman. So, I am going to meet her with a great bouquet of roses and give her a big hug . Then, we are going to visit her house. She has a beautiful house, it is like a castle. It is not too big, but it is cute. To get to her home, we will take a walk on the path to her house. On the both sides, there are beautiful flowers which we can pick. On the right of the path, there is a small pond with frogs. They will sing a beautiful song. We're going to walk down the hill, and from there, we will be able to see her house. At the back of her house there is a beautiful river. She has a rich garden with many trees and fruits. She's going to cook my favorite soup for me. I've never tested soup this delicious. She is going to cook corn on the cob. After that, we're going to swim in the river. We're going to sing songs and after that, we ar going to visit my relatives. I am sure she wants to see where I live right now. We 're going to fly on an airplane to the U.S. We're going to visit my apartment. I am going to cook and have a great party with all my relatives. We're going to shop at the market, and after that, at the mall. I am sure she will buy me a beautiful present. Can you guess who this person is? I will tell you. She is a famous model in my family and her name is Malana. She is my grandma. I miss her so much. I can't erase good people like my grandma from my life. They stay forever in my heart. I wish to be like her.... (written by Larisa) (edited by Bill Z.)
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This is a great start, Larisa! Spellcheck it once - then again! I think the grammar is fine - you can proofread, polish, and finish it in class. A great essay!
ReplyDeleteHi Larissa! Today I visited your blog and is very
ReplyDeleteinteresting what did you write about your grandma, and don't feel sorry about it you are like her.
Congratulations.